Week 1
Students learn basic editing techniques, mark-up, and text.
Week 2
Students continue with focus on basic editing techniques.
Week 3
Students work at learning how to identify and correct sentence and paragraph structural difficulties and errors.
Week 4
Students utilize above techniques to edit their own work. Some exploration will also be made of markets for editing jobs for students wishing to become employed in the editing or proofreading fields.
Week 5
Students work with other students utilizing provided critique methods and appropriate editing techniques.
Week 6
Students submit, for
critique, a final project. This project
consists of an original piece of text,
the marked version, and the corrected
version.
If students are looking to be employed
in the editing of proofreading field,
they can utilize a second option of
taking a standard editing test.
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SAMPLE LESSON WEEK 1
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As we write, our goal in fiction or
non-fiction is to produce a final draft
free from not only spelling or
grammatical errors but that is also
pleasing to the reader, contains
appropriate and relevant content, and
follows generally accepted writing
practices. As we write more, this
process can become more stream-lined and
easier to work with. In that same vein,
as writers become more professional and
used to writing "clean" copy, we
sometimes become lazy and allow small
errors to creep into our writing.
In either type of writing (business or
fiction), one error (glaring or small)
can sometimes trip the reader up and
make the rest of the document appear to
be unreliable or faulty. If the reader
doesn't trust the writer or the content
of the document, he might make the
conscious decision to stop reading or
doubt the content of the entire
document.
Good editing requires the writer to be
attentive to not only editing practices
but to also recognize his or her own
basic writing pitfalls. Each writer has
their own set of writing issues that
they repeat when they write everything
from correspondence to manuals. To help
you in editing, it is good to take a
look at what problems you find within
your own writing on a repeated basis.
For example, do you find yourself
utilizing passive verbs or adverbs too
frequently? Do spelling errors on
certain words creep into your writing?
Do you shift tenses within the same
paragraph or page? Do your subjects and
verbs agree?
Listed below are three links that
include common proofreader and editor's
symbols. While you can utilize these
symbols if they work for you, I also
suggest that you find your own balance
of tools.
For example, in my own writing, I use a
mixture of the tools below--the
paragraph marker, underline,
capitalization, bold, delete--to name a
few. I also insert my own personal
marking tools that are recognizable to
my eye and brain. These tools include
the use of different colored ink to mark
geometric figures on the page. This
technique can be helpful in recognizing
overuse of words or phrases like adverbs
or "weak" verbs. I might designate red
circles for adverbs and green squares
for the weak verbs. After I have marked
the document with those two options, I
can look back over the page and check
for repetition and over-use.
If you are working on a computer as you
write, Word and WordPerfect offer some
great tools to start with as well. You
can utilize the built-in grammar and
spell-check functions as a beginning
option. As you already know, these tools
are not fool-proof or always reliable.
After an initial check with them, I also
run a search for the above-mentioned
things like adverb usage or "weak"
verbs. One example is that Word will
note how many passive verbs are utilized
which also gives you a starting point
for making your writing stronger. You
can also turn on the function within
these programs that allow a notation of
changes made within the text. This
feature helps you to notice not only
what changes have been made but also the
frequency of these changes. It also
gives you a visual representation of
document and your changes.
http://www.colorado.edu/Publications/styleguide/symbols.html
http://webster.commnet.edu/writing/symbols.htm
Your assignment for this week is to try
utilizing the above three techniques for
editing your own writing:
1. Utilize geometric figures (square,
circle, triangle, hexagon, etc.) in
different colors of ink to note three of
the following items: passive verbs,
adverbs, unnecessary words,
misspellings, simple grammatical errors,
or redundant word usage.
2. Try using the common proofreader's
symbols at the above links to mark-up a
short document that you are currently
working on. You may also use of the
symbols without realizing it.
3. Utilize the electronic tools
available to edit your own work. Explore
what Word or WordPerfect offer to help
you in your editing.
Next week, we will work on learning what
mixture of these three techniques works
best for you. So, for this week, don't
feel as though you have to perfect any
of these techniques or choose one as the
only one you utilize. Throughout the
course, we will work on finding the best
and most comfortable balance for you. As
you work on this week's assignment, you
might even make sidenotes on what things
work the best for you, what methods you
are already using, and what feels
awkward or forced to you.
